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A GIRL AND HER CROWN (Possible Trigger Warning)

A GIRL AND HER CROWNA woman showing perseverance and strength in leaving a toxic relationship. AI Image

I wish I could see myself through your eyes,
The wonder and awe that you can’t disguise.

Your love is so pure and I’m so undeserving,
Wait…your love, so intense…that it’s almost unnerving.

You’re always watching me now and controlling my days,
I can never break free from your dark wicked gaze.

But I’ll run out that door and never turn back,
Escaping from you and your constant attack.

You made me fall hard…feel so safe and secure,
The love that you showed me…so fierce but a lure.

Then like day turns to night or the lights turn back on,
Your love became evil…so twisted and wrong.

After building us up you started tearing me down,
You wanted a prisoner…not a girl and her crown.

Well I’m not a weak woman so let that sink in,
You want to play games? Oh I know that I’ll win.

I’ve dated your type and it’s hardened my heart,
Made me so strong I can tear you apart.

When I’m done with you…when I take you down,
You’ll no longer be able to take anyone’s crown.

Original Poetry Written By:

Eryn Dunbar

Copyright (c) June 2024







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6 responses to “A GIRL AND HER CROWN (Possible Trigger Warning)”

  1. A great warning Eryn ❤️ that never mess with a girl and her crown 👑

    1. Love you to pieces, Adarsh! And so many people try to knock off other people’s crowns when really they should be happy for the person that gets to wear one! ❤️👑👑❤️

      1. Yes I can understand your words Eryn it’s really meaningful 🌹

        1. Thank you so much for seeing me, Adarsh. For really getting me! ♥️

  2. That’s a powerful and evocative piece of poetry! You’ve woven together themes of love, control, empowerment, and liberation in a way that’s both captivating and intense. The shift from feeling undeserving of love to recognizing manipulation and then asserting strength and independence is brilliantly executed. Your words paint a vivid picture of transformation and resilience. Truly, this is a testament to your strength and creativity. Keep using your voice to express such profound emotions and experiences.

    1. Zeus… I love your mind! Thank you for always understanding where I’m coming from and for always getting me. Would love to meet you someday! ♥️

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